Honestly I can't tell what the middle word on Drink, Lie, Sleep so the one with I'm Fine - is easier to read, but it wouldn't stop by scroll. One piece of advice I received early on was to search videos like I was creating to get an idea of what the most popular viewed videos were in that topic. I'm assuming that your video is potentially about depression or chronic illness, but there isn't anything there that makes me want to click. I like the outline on you on the right. I'd do some work on the text alignment and potentially skip the boxes around each word. You might consider simply changing the one on the right - to the same words, but use a big bold font withou whatever is going on behind them so it's easier to read - and all one color with a text effect. Hope that helps.
