Video Review A day out at the seaside

[JourneyVerse]

User name: JourneyVerse
Title of thread: A day out at the seaside
Self review: I love the video I just donΓÇÖt know if it tells enough of a story.
Channel review or Video review? Video review

Link to Video: https://community.tubebuddy.com/index.php?threads/31821/
Link to other review post: https://community.tubebuddy.com/index.php?threads/31821/

 

[Stanley | Team TB]

Hey man, both links here go to your review. Can you edit your post to include the link to your video?

 

[Damon]

The link to the video is that same link tot the review. We need the video link in order to help.

 

[JourneyVerse]

The link to the video is that same link tot the review. We need the video link in order to help.

IΓÇÖll send you a direct link here thanks I canΓÇÖt edit the thread

View: https://youtu.be/a2EZfYYJhS4

 

[Crazy Aunts]

Visually beautiful, just gorgeous! Video is a little slow moving in some places. Needs some build up of expectation. What is the story? When did you arrive there? Did you use a drone? Were you happy there? It would help to see your faces. How did it feel when you were leaving? IΓÇÖm only giving this feedback as a viewer. My video skills are nowhere near your level. Well done!

 

[EnglishwithLiz]

Lovely drone shots and very well filmed, so as a work of art great and maybe that is what you want, but as @Crazy Aunts says, I really think it needs a story if you want to engage viewers.

 

[Kids Fun]

Lovely drone shots and very well filmed, so as a work of art great and maybe that is what you want, but as @Crazy Aunts says, I really think it needs a story if you want to engage viewers.

I agree. If you want to engage your viewers you have to have a story. Awesome work!

 

[JourneyVerse]

Visually beautiful, just gorgeous! Video is a little slow moving in some places. Needs some build up of expectation. What is the story? When did you arrive there? Did you use a drone? Were you happy there? It would help to see your faces. How did it feel when you were leaving? IΓÇÖm only giving this feedback as a viewer. My video skills are nowhere near your level. Well done!

thank you for your feedback, i know what you mean by the story, im trying to develop my story telling skills as this is something i struggle with, i think the more i do it and the more shots i take the better i will get, thanks for your feedback and everyone elses.