Video Review I would greatly appreciate some feedback/constructive criticism on my latest video.

[willy2232]

User name: willy2232
Title of thread: I would greatly appreciate some feedback/constructive criticism on my latest video.
Self review: I need to work on editing, and writing my scripts better. I also really need to work on my tumbnails.
Channel review or Video review? Video review

Link to Video:

View: https://youtu.be/riOXYdLLQmo

Link to other review post: https://community.tubebuddy.com/index.php?threads/35901/

 

[TechSpaceAu]

Hey Just watched you video and thought it was great. I think your script was really good and story telling had me to the end of the video. My only suggestion is i would like to see more b-roll of the things you're talking about. It was cool watching the game play but think any good story telling has visuals that move with it. But other than that great video and your doing an awesome job.

 

[willy2232]

Hey Just watched you video and thought it was great. I think your script was really good and story telling had me to the end of the video. My only suggestion is i would like to see more b-roll of the things you're talking about. It was cool watching the game play but think any good story telling has visuals that move with it. But other than that great video and your doing an awesome job.

Yo thanks a lot homie, all make sure to keep the background footage more relevant in my next video.

 

[willy2232]

We only watched a few minutes of the clip. Yet judging from the other comment, it could use some tweaking up.

could you be more specific? I dont really understand what tweaking up means.

 

[TheHappyKidShow]

Good script. More broll needs to be added to spice it up. Your voice and tone is good, I think you are doing great!