Thumbnail Feedback How can i improve this thumbnail

[DemetreHicks]

 

[Scuplex]

I PERSONALLY can't see anything that has to do with the TITLE you are promoting the thumbnail
Decorating my room WISH that's what i see!
so as a viewer that see's your video in the recommendation i wouldn't press it cause i can't see anything that has to do with your room or even WISH i only see behind the text YOUR FACE
Thats completely different for me!!

But i like the WISH and the DECORATING using only text
They are clear , clen
and easy to read!!
Take this in mind this is MY opinion others maybe would like it !

 

[TubeBuddy]

I PERSONALLY can't see anything that has to do with the TITLE you are promoting the thumbnail
Decorating my room WISH that's what i see!
so as a viewer that see's your video in the recommendation i wouldn't press it cause i can't see anything that has to do with your room or even WISH i only see behind the text YOUR FACE
Thats completely different for me!!

But i like the WISH and the DECORATING using only text
They are clear , clen
and easy to read!!
Take this in mind this is MY opinion others maybe would like it !

To add to this, maybe have your face on one side, and down the middle a line, then your room blurry and a reaction to that with your face, kind of like what you have here

 

[DemetreHicks]

I decided to change it does this look any better

 

[Scuplex]

View attachment 4249

I decided to change it does this look any better

I can read it better now! But the one problem as i mentioned and Andrew did is the Room part and the text part

 

[DemetreHicks]

well I used the no SEO tool and it works really well since you can look at other's thumbnails and get some ideas here is the newest on and i think i really like this type of thumbnails

 

[Scuplex]

well I used the no SEO tool and it works really well since you can look at other's thumbnails and get some ideas here is the newest on and i think i really like this type of thumbnails View attachment 4262

Thats WAY WAY better!! just keep in mind you need some text! You can improve your photoshop because as we can see in your .. butt its cutted out! Overall is way better!

 

[DemetreHicks]

thx you, i will keep that in mind and will try to improve

 

[Scuplex]

thx you, i will keep that in mind and will try to improve

Improving is the way to success !

 

[DemetreHicks]

agreed

 

[RobBalasabas]

Great improvements from the original version you posted @DemetreHicks

 

[DemetreHicks]

you really think so

 

[Ikerot]

Hm... in the newer thumbnail, I don't know what the video's about. It just looks like you're shocked... but from what? How about combining the text from pic #2 with pic #3

 

[TubeBuddy]

Hm... in the newer thumbnail, I don't know what the video's about. It just looks like you're shocked... but from what? How about combining the text from pic #2 with pic #3

I like this idea!

 

[Mario So]

I like this idea!

This combo mentioned might work!

 

[PhatBeetz]

Definitely agree with Mario on this one. It's a good teaser to have your reaction on the left side, but I really didn't get a sense of what you were implying in terms of the content in your video.

I love watching the progression in this thread! Prime example of community input and improvement as a result!

 

[MartyW]

What is the channel about?
NM I checked it out, using the Wish web site, I get it now...

 

[DemetreHicks]

thanks everyone that commented I changed it but IΓÇÖm on my phone right now so I canΓÇÖt post the picture