Channel Review Looking for some honest feedback

[AshleyRachel]

User name: AshleyRachel
Title of thread: Looking for some honest feedback
Self review: The more I do the videos, the more I see an improvement in the way I edit and present myself, but I wonder can viewers see that?
Channel review or Video review? Video review

Link to Video:

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZzN5BrrnLBI

Link to other review post: https://community.tubebuddy.com/index.php?threads/24480/

 

[Senior Notions]

Hi AshleyRachel,

You have a wonderful presence and amazing talent for makeup! You have a great voice; I think people would like to listen to you more. Maybe if you mention the products and say a little something about them - like what effect you are using it for, or other little bits of info.

I agree you present yourself well, just maybe more voice to keep viewers' interest. Also, I think the closer up shot for the second half worked better than the medium shot in the beginning. Good luck with your channel, I think you will do really well.

 

[craftfornaught]

User name: AshleyRachel
Title of thread: Looking for some honest feedback
Self review: The more I do the videos, the more I see an improvement in the way I edit and present myself, but I wonder can viewers see that?
Channel review or Video review? Video review

Link to Video:

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZzN5BrrnLBI

Link to other review post: https://community.tubebuddy.com/index.php?threads/24480/

Hi Ashley!
I think the music is not fit.
The camera angle : focus more closely on your details.
And the light: sometime the shadows of your hands cover your face.

 

[Retro Reels]

User name: AshleyRachel
Title of thread: Looking for some honest feedback
Self review: The more I do the videos, the more I see an improvement in the way I edit and present myself, but I wonder can viewers see that?
Channel review or Video review? Video review

Link to Video:

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZzN5BrrnLBI

Link to other review post: https://community.tubebuddy.com/index.php?threads/24480/

I think the video would be more engaging if you either spoke in the video or narrated over the top - you could do this to explain the product you are using and also give tips on the application of it.
You could also overlay the image of the product on the screen whilst using it. Eventually this could land you with some sponsors?

 

[Luckotoys]

Hey Ashley I completely agree with everyone else I would love to have heard you talking throughout the video about each of the different kind of makeup you used. I think the video looks awesome! I wish I could do makeup like that I have have up on wearing makeup lol.... But one more thing I also don't think the music you had with this video matched very well... But everything else to me looks awesome good luck!!

 

[TSELVIN]

User name: AshleyRachel
Title of thread: Looking for some honest feedback
Self review: The more I do the videos, the more I see an improvement in the way I edit and present myself, but I wonder can viewers see that?
Channel review or Video review? Video review

Link to Video:

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZzN5BrrnLBI

Link to other review post: https://community.tubebuddy.com/index.php?threads/24480/

Honestly I think it was a great makeup video but have u ever tried talking instead of using subtitles.