Video Review Comedy Let's Play of Valkyria Chronicles, is it funny?

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  1. 12Breacher

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    For starters your intro is too long. People decide within the first 10 seconds of a video if they are going to watch, and your intro is 15 seconds. When it comes to the intro, what is it doing to tell us? Also no introduction? I know it's episode seven, but I have no idea what I am watching and you should make every video start with what they are going to get in that episode.... I have no idea here. Audio quality is fine, but when it comes to dead air you can either improve over it, or always have a few subject points you want to hit in that episode to avoid it. Other wise it's not bad, but I Found myself looking for comments and other things. Maybe in the dead space ask the viewers a question, get us engaged!

    Overall, I think there is a lot of good here, but I think just riffing off each other more, and using what is happening in game can REALLY help you out.

    Also consider getting rid of "Episode" in the title. What is it doing to reach a broader audience? If I am on episode 7, why should I watch. You can put #7 in the tags, or even shorten it, but as is is a bit lengthy.

    I hope that helps!

    it was a good video, but take that into account!
     


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    Thank you, this is great feedback. It helps a lot!