Thumbnail Feedback Thoughts on my thumbnail?

[Sir From The 6IX]

Hi All I am new and I am looking for feedback and any suggestions is welcome.

 

[Woodward]

I would have the speech bubbles and their text much larger since right now (without opening the image) it is hard to read. Remember, some people will only see a small thumbnail on a phone.

 

[Sir From The 6IX]

I would have the speech bubbles and their text much larger since right now (without opening the image) it is hard to read. Remember, some people will only see a small thumbnail on a phone.

Ok! Thank you for the feedback on that! I truly appreciate that!

 

[Sir From The 6IX]

I would have the speech bubbles and their text much larger since right now (without opening the image) it is hard to read. Remember, some people will only see a small thumbnail on a phone.

Hey, I touched up a bit, what you think now?

 

[Vince Alvino]

Thumbnails may only get a glance before someone decides to click or not. I like the overall image but the text, whether in a bubble or not needs to be eye catching. Make it larger and see how it fits the design. It looks great otherwise.

 

[MattCommand1]

Hey, I touched up a bit, what you think now?

There is a lot of things going on in the thumbnail, a lot of elements. I am not sure how well it will translate to phone viewing.

 

[Theory Guitar]

Hey, I touched up a bit, what you think now?

That looks awesome. But as some of the other guys said it is a little busy. I would also make the VS a-lot bigger.