Video Review I'd like a review / criticism on my video

[President poverty]

User name: President poverty
Title of thread: I'd like a review / criticism on my video
Self review: Pretty well edited video considering i'm a new youtuber. Some funny moments. Maybe at one point i used similiar sound effects too many times almost back to back at the clips. Overall i think i have to improve on my commentary and comedic timing.
Channel review or Video review? Video review

Link to Video:

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N8toR3XRRoQ&t=55s

Link to other review post: https://community.tubebuddy.com/index.php?threads/39543/

 

[Intelligence is sexy]

I dont know which game it is, but you can add free sfx when the guy hit by the car to make it more interesting for the subscriber.

 

[Mcdizzlegaming]

Loved it! Was funny, for myself though I wish the dude getting hit with the car had more physics. But good job!

 

[Tropical Sounds]

I actually really enjoyed this. I don't think people would notice the use of the sound effect more than once because I assumed it was apart of the game lol. Your commentary is good and I think over time you'll get better

 

[likeshigh]

This is an intresting video. I enjoy this video.

 

[DeadMango]

I actually really like your style of video! Some things I would change however is maybe going for background music that's not as distracting or turn it down a bit more to make it less distracting, also the text that appears when you say something I would put more to the centre of the screen if you're trying to bring more attention to it! Yes you used some of the same sound effects at different points but I feel like it was spread out enough to not be annoying, I hope you do well with your channel!