Video Review my video breaking down police in america and what defund the police actually means

[Drivenprogressive]

User name: Drivenprogressive
Title of thread: my video breaking down police in america and what defund the police actually means
Self review: i think i dont fully get my point across im trying to get better at breaking things down
Channel review or Video review? Video review

Link to Video:

View: https://youtu.be/Bd1jXvIps0E

Link to other review post: https://community.tubebuddy.com/index.php?threads/28645/post-86179

 

[shehastobechicboutiq]

Hello,
I watched all 17:05 of your video. I thought your video flowed and you touched on many great topics without a bias opinion. I liked how you incorporated what past police officers said about their experiences, being silenced for speaking out. Perhaps I missed in your video about where funds could be allocated if we defunded the police and place some of their funds in other areas in our community. I saw an interesting article on CNN on the topic. https://www.cnn.com/2020/06/06/us/what-is-defund-police-trnd/index.html. Not saying you need to use article but perhaps if you found one that you liked on the topic of where the funds could go into our communities , I think it would be a really great topic to explore. Many people don't realize defunding the police means we could put funds back into our communities in areas that are underfunded, if police had a reduction of funding. I am a juvenile detention teacher and I liked your touch on the criminal justice system. Keep the good content coming. I subscribed to your channel because I actually like informative content like this. I hope your channel thrives.

-Si

 

[Drivenprogressive]

Hello,
I watched all 17:05 of your video. I thought your video flowed and you touched on many great topics without a bias opinion. I liked how you incorporated what past police officers said about their experiences, being silenced for speaking out. Perhaps I missed in your video about where funds could be allocated if we defunded the police and place some of their funds in other areas in our community. I saw an interesting article on CNN on the topic. https://www.cnn.com/2020/06/06/us/what-is-defund-police-trnd/index.html. Not saying you need to use article but perhaps if you found one that you liked on the topic of where the funds could go into our communities , I think it would be a really great topic to explore. Many people don't realize defunding the police means we could put funds back into our communities in areas that are underfunded, if police had a reduction of funding. I am a juvenile detention teacher and I liked your touch on the criminal justice system. Keep the good content coming. I subscribed to your channel because I actually like informative content like this. I hope your channel thrives.

-Si

thanks for the feedback check out campaign zero thats the group i talk about towards the end i put a link in my description they talk about 10 different steps we can take with defund the police lots of good stuff on their site glad you liked the content

 

[Reviews By You]

Well put together but your mid-video "little rant" didn't come across (for my taste) brilliantly...... could just be me. Nicely put together.

 

[StoryBehindDahMusic]

Liked the thumbnail. Liked the transition from one clip to another. Actually, very informative, I had to watch all of it.

 

[Harpyjessy]

Your video follows a systematic structure. The beginning was catchy an you also explain in Details. I really like your content. It is really insightful. Kudos. The video and sound quality is also on point.

Your video follows a systematic structure. The beginning was catchy an you also explain in Details. I really like your content. It is really insightful. Kudos. The video and sound quality is also on point.

I forgot to mention that yoi also did a thorough research.