The yellow and black border is pretty nice. But the airplane pictures are not of HIGH QUALITY. Try to put High contrast image that clearly shows the message of this video. Use vibrant color for text. The text container needs a catchy color.
Hello Jay. Welcome to the community forum. I am glad that you started your YouTube channel. Using iPhone for VLOGs is still fine, and graphics to videos is better idea. I am sure you will grow your channel in no time. All the best.