I mean it's good you're taking criticism it's the best way to learn because it's hard to do on your own!
Only other way would be to check out other short story channels for inspiration in terms of the content that's used to drive the story, pace, flow etc!
User name: Half Ninja Giant
Title of thread: LOOKING FOR HONEST CRITICISM FOR MY MOST RECENT VIDEO!!
Self review: I am looking to improve my editing primarily, any help to point out where I am missing the mark with comedy, maybe some feedback on my thumbnails too! Thanks!
Channel review or...
Hullo, I'm HNG and I give very kinda direct and honest replies!
I like your channel which is one of the few times i've immediately said this!
to me it's a bit sporadic though..? You went from horror games to reaction vids to monster noises which doesn't necessarily fall within a set genre if...
If you've never seen me comment on other peoples posts, HI I'm HNG and I'm very direct so no hard feelings!
The title screen could be the word "Nightmare" inlayed within the scene of the forest perhaps within the trees or in the background of the forest in big bold letters, the best thing I can...
I WOULD
Change your banner to be like..IDK an army of cats with your name in big bold letter than have the @'s at the bottom corner!
Consistently do cat videos? add music or sound or whatever and you could just do a compilation video genre?
There's a dude singing with you saying you approve...
OKAY SO, I also do gaming videos so I'm gonna give this to you straight as possible and we can learn and ignore feelings.
You're doing a lot of things right, edits, thumbnails and even using chapters, subtitles etc are all at a pretty good level.
Imo a few of your thumbnails needs to be a bit...
Hi! I like the thumbnail for me, agreeing with a previous comment. It's just the text is not the most legible, Bolder writing with a bit more colour, your other thumbnails on your channel are perfect. I would maybe just change the text to be "DIY Money Tree"? Just to keep it short! Otherwise...
I like it, I would remove the smaller white text at the bottom!
I don't have a clue what an LUT is if I'm honest but if you're sure your target audience knows then I would say it's really good!
I agree in a sense, some jump cuts can feel random or messy. However, i feel like it's equally as bad having 50 transitions in a video so it's hard to win with that. I agree the start of my videos are a bit rougher than the later stages so it's something I'll attempt to improve at!
Dude I cannot thank you enough, I've left a bigger reponse as a comment but you've pointed out some stuff that I've clearly missed or thought about and was too uncertain to make that call. Hugely appreciate you taking the time to make this man
These montage videos are not typically the style that I watch or create so I am struggling to give actual feedback.
However, there is a large League of Legends YouTube channel called LOLNAM: https://www.youtube.com/@lolnam
I know it is a different game but this is a very similar style of video...
Your channel is very good, I think it's just one of those things that happens from time to time. The only feedback I can give would be to maybe change the thumbnail of your videos to remove the large green banner.
I've attached an example from a large youtube channel for a comparison and I...
User name: Half Ninja Giant
Title of thread: Needing ACTUAL criticism from other like minded people. I need brutal honesty so I can learn from my mistakes and improve.
Self review: Things I would like to improve at: Video Pacing, Video Editing, Cut/Zoom effects, Comedy. These are the focus...
User name: Half Ninja Giant
Title of introduction: Scottish YouTuber 24, 10’3, 3", Twitch Affiliate Parkour Champion Top 2% in League Find Myself Funny, Swears a Lot
Your name/ Alias: Half Ninja Giant
Where are you from? Scotland
How did you find TubeBuddy? Through YouTube
What made you...
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